A song that I wrote recently; when i couldn't sleep; at about 3:15 in the morning...
Hope you like it.
:)
"A Better Part Of Me"
I'm trying to close my eyes from,
Such an endless and dreary day.
Into a good night's sleep that would,
Hopefully rub this wariness away.
Sedimented thoughts, in my head,
And I keep losing count of sheep.
My eyes are awake as my mind ticks on;
And I can't seem to go to sleep.
CH:
Why does life, seem so slow?
Yet time ticks by so fast.
Why does joy erase so easily?
While guilt and sorrow, lasts.
I try; but why can't I let go,
Of all these thoughts and memories?
Why can't I just sleep and wake up,
To a better part of me?
. . .
Reviewing mistakes I once made;
Through work done in haste, or left incomplete.
I'd say it's "learning from my past";
But in reality, I'm stuck in it.
The night mocks my insomnia;
The clock ticks surely, to remind.
No matter how much I cherish the present;
It's gonna be the past; I'll try leaving behind.
CH:
Why does life, seem so slow?
Yet time ticks by so fast.
Why does joy erase so easily?
While guilt and sorrow, lasts.
I try; but why can't I let go,
Of all these thoughts and memories?
Why can't I just sleep and wake up,
To a better part of me?
. . .
Sam...i love this one too. it matches my state, especially in the past few days!!:)and yes m gonna save this one!!:)
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ReplyDeleteThe character in this piece should appreciate the past, BUT move on. Can't let the past forever hold one back!
ReplyDeleteGreat rhetoric, sam!
very apt a poem
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