It is a bit amateurish, but its one that I am rather amused by, check it out...
It's called, "teenage", hope you like it:
I'm on a peer service commitment,
Stumbling over life's test.
And I am busy shouting out,
Desperate slogans of protest.
'Coz they're impairing my mobility,
And activity in communities.
Yet, I can't quite make out,
What they really think of me.
Strangling me out of fun,
And maybe "chaos and destruction"!
But, then they keep my philosophies,
Under constant supervision.
So, I'm slipping in white lies;
For the sake of occasional freedom.
And am thinking of better excuses,
Through the gift of teenage wisdom!
But, then, "Welcome to Homework"!
"The brain; it better not stray!"
I'm convinced it's books; not girls,
That's eating my heart and soul away!
Liberty's just the "freedom to obey";
My tale's a modern tragedy.
Because i spent my teenage times,
Being a victim of Authority!
good one :)
ReplyDeletewell well..I really don't think it's amateurish, like u said. pretty well written, I like the second last para..so cute and innocent;)
ReplyDeletenice one!! happy writing:)
Awesome bro.....
ReplyDeleteumm, its interesting. smthing most ppl can relate to.
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